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Episode 11: "Fixing the Dojo"
(A 'Rurouni Kenshin' fanfiction by
Greetings, readers, and welcome to yet another fanfic
review here on Project AFTER! I apologize for the long delay
in getting this episode onto your internet browser, but it's
here now so let's just focus on that and not go into how
unashamedly lazy I am when it comes to adding new content to
this site. As those lovable Chipmunks would say, "It's been
awhile, but we're back in style, so get set to have some
Mind you, I'm only quoting those lyrics because it's such a
sweet-ass theme song, and you shouldn't take their meaning
literally, since reading through today's featured fanfiction
will be anything but fun. Confusing, disturbing, repulsive,
gut-wrenchingly awful... There are many adjectives that
accurately describe this fanfic, but "fun" is nowhere
to be seen on the list. Trust me, I double-checked.
The first problem with this fic is one that you'll spot
early on, right in the name of its author: Demonicslayer.
Besides the irksome lack of a space between the two words
that comprise his name, the meaning behind such a title is
infuriatingly ambiguous. Is he a slayer of demons,
making him good, or is he himself the demonic entity, making
him evil? You could spend hours pondering this and never
arrive at any sort of satisfying answer, and that's just
As if that weren't enough, the fanfic itself is simply
horrendous for many dozens of reasons, the least of which is
not because it features rape. Gang rape. A virgin
getting gang-raped, no less. Unluckily for ol' Demonicslayer,
that's pretty damn high on my personal list of unacceptable
taboos, right up there with pedophilia, bestiality, and sex
involving fursuits. Especially that last one. I mean,
seriously furries, WTF?
Getting back to the point, if you don't wish to have
descriptions of forced "relations" displayed on your
monitor, then I suggest you bail out now. Otherwise, tread
lightly and follow me as we study the darker side of Rurouni
Kenshin lemons in "Fixing the Dojo", a fic packed to the
rafters with sheer stupidity that's outmatched only by an
overwhelming amount of vulgarity in a combo potently
terrible enough to strike weaker men dead where they stand
On the bright side, I think I just solved the mystery of
whether Demonicslayer is good or evil...
hiya all you fanficie peeps!
Plz take off you shoes before you come in, I just cleaned ;P
I was actually thinkin' I'd just take one shoe off and beat
you with it.
itís another fanfic party and
yur all invited though! ::hands you a festive party hat::
::takes the pointy end of the hat and shoves it into your
left eye as hard as he can::
What you're about to read iz a
Rurouni kenshin fic and a really good one i might add! Just
so you know, I didn't write it. Dis was written by my friend
demonicslayer, but he couldn't put it up on ff.net because
his acount got deleted. but I'm reposting it here for him!
Now that's a brilliant idea right there. Your friend got
banned for putting this story on the site, but maybe if you
put up the exact same story then the FanFiction.net
moderators will let it slide because you have more smiley
faces in your profile.
Plz enjoy Ok! Oh and if yur
under 18 don't read. It has some "adult" situatins in it so
your mom n pop might not like it. ::lols::
Oh my God, the stereotypes are all true!
Hello Demonicslayer here!
Animegurl123 and Demonicslayer... Now there's a
deadly alliance for ya... Together they posted a fic so
brutal. So evil. So deadly.
Okay for a very long time I have
LOVED Rurouni Kenshin, I went and looked up every thing
about the show and was confused to see barely any fanfiction
so here is one to contribute...
Oh yeah, I mean, at the time of this writing, fanfiction.net
only has 11,659 Rurouni Kenshin stories in its archives,
while mediaminer.org has a mere 1,336, not to mention all
the hundreds of privately-owned fanfic sites that
collectively contain many thousands more. Obviously the
internet was in dire need of more Rurouni Kenshin fanfics,
and I personally thank you, good sir, for doing your part to
see that this alarming shortage comes to an end.
Even though I admit I love Inuyasha
more! So I decided to write a Kenshin fic!!! Please note
that I made two new characters, both girls, a young one for
Yahiko's crush and the other is Sanosuke's left behind
lover. PS this story will not be on ff.net because they
cancelled my second account bunch of @$$holes!
Yes, damn them for enforcing their own rules about not
posting fics with adult content! Fucking Nazis!
New characters in later chapters!
Pairings: Kenshin/Kaoru Sanosuke/Mika Yahiko/Aowyn (
Now you're importing Lord of the Rings characters into your
fic!? Well hey, if it makes sense to you...
Dawn had just risen over the horizon touching down on the
damaged Dojo. During the night some drunk ex-swordsman
picked a fight with Sanosuke. They had taken their anger out
on the old Dojo tearing it apart.
"This is for reminding me that my father never hugged me, ya
The old Dojo was a mess, but know
one seemed to care at this point. They were gathering their
weapons and heading out. It was payback time....
Guys, guys, if you mess up their dojo then the only
thing you'll accomplish is starting a destructive cycle of
violence and broken dojos.
Just one @ symbol would have sufficed, thank you.
Miss Kaoru sat in the middle of the
main room at the Dojo sipping her tea. She had had a long
day of training little Yahiko, Who was outside training on
Sounds like she's really working her ass off there...
Kenshin and Sanosuke had gone into
town for a drink and to buy more food supplies. She couldn't
move her body ached from all the exercises she did today.
She took another sip and almost spit it out from being
Kaoru: *pffffpt* 5:30 already!? A new episode of
Fatherhood is on!
There was a sudden bang against the
Dojo doors. The sound got louder until...*CRACK* The wall
began splitting. Yahiko who had heard the commotion slid
through the back door and sat down next to Kaoru.
They're going to deal with this attack while calmly seated.
Because they're just that cool.
She stood and grabbed the nearest
sword without looking. The front door completely gave in and
crashed open. " What is the meaning of this?" She yelled as
men by the dozen began to enter through the hole in the
Jeez, the Jehovah's Witnesses were pushy back then.
The men looked older than thirty
and drunk. They began to swarm around the main room forming
a circle around the two. The bandits snickered and stared
down the teacher and her student. Out of no where Kaoru
found the courage to stand for what was right.
Yes, how unexpected that she would do something she did in
pretty much every episode of the entire series.
She lowered the sword and
approached a man that looked like the leader. He was tall,
bulky and had shaggy brown hair.
" What are you doing here! You have no right to....*SMACK*
Ooof" Kaoru hit the ground whimpering, while rubbing a hand
on her abused cheek.
Oh, WHAT!? Kaoru tries to take on a single unarmed guy and
gets beat to the ground in one hit... I'm beginning to think
that Demicslayer has, in fact, never actually seen or read
A tiny bit of blood trailed down
her cheek covering it in red stickiness .The man had struck
her hard. " Women shouldn't talk out of turn! Know your
place! You wench!" He demanded. A few men laughed at their
boss's move. The boss chuckled himself.
Boss: Heheh, yeah, what I said was pretty funny. Heheheh,
He then walked over to the floor
bound woman. He swung his foot and kicked her in the stomach
hard. " Owwww! Stop please leave. Kenshin...Kenshin...
God, the syntax is even more painful to read than the
Kaoru slid across the floor as the
man kicked her again to silence her. Out of breath, She hit
the feet of some other men. The intruders bursted into
laughter and one man picked her up by the forearm.
So what exactly has Yahiko been doing all this time, anyway?
Did he run off to take a dump when the bandits first came
in? Or maybe he just doesn't care that his teacher is
slowly getting beaten to death.
She couldn't protest, her body
ached as he violently slung her over his shoulder. "A little
prize for ourselves!" The man joked and his grip tightened
on her. Blood trickled down to the floor from her mouth.
Wow, she sure is bleeding a lot for someone who just got
roughed up a little... Her platelet count must be
dangerously low or something.
Yahiko grinded his teeth and lunged
forward for an attack only to be stooped by the man's very
large hand in his face.
"Stooped"? In Demonicslayer's mind, if the spell-check
doesn't catch it, it's not a typo.
" Let her go!" He struggled and
smashed the guys foot with his practice stick. " Owww! You
little ingrate!" he yelled and lifted Yahiko off the ground
by his shirt.
Bandit: You little ingrate! After all I've done for you...!
I destroyed your house, I beat up your friend and mentor,
and this is the thanks I get!?
"Hey let me go you!" He yelled and
struggled. " You know since your trying to save her I think
we'll help you out and just take her, as ours. The little
wench needs to learn her place...In a man's bed!" They all
burst out laughing.
Ahahahaha! "In a man's bed!" Hahaha! These guys are a riot!
Kaoru's mind raced ' Are they going
to rape me? Oh Kenshin where are you?'
Before anything else could happen the back doors flew wide
open. The men turned around to see two men.
The men saw the men, who saw the other men, and the men knew
that the men were there for a fight, man to man.
Standing there in the door was
Kenshin and Sanosuke looking as calm as ever. " Release the
boy!" Sanosuke said. Neither Kenshin or Sanosuke saw the
wounded Kaoru. ( A/N: Part of my plot! They don't realize
she is in captivity AT THIS POINT!*!)
Hey moron, guess what, you don't need to reveal plot points
via author's notes when said parts of the plot are obvious
just from reading the story.
The man smirked and dropped Yahiko.
He hit the ground and scrambled to his feet. " Please
leave."Kenshin said calmly.
(A/N: This is part of the plot you guys! Kenshin is speaking
calming AT THIS POINT! Just... Just thought you might want
to know. OK, on with the story!)
The group whispered among one
another and they turned to look at their boss. He shrugged.
(A/N: This is also part of the plot! The head bandit boss
guy is shrugging... AT THIS POINT! Just wanted to make sure
you didn't miss that!)
Kenshin gripped his sword lightly
and Sanosuke cracked his knuckles. " Attack them men!" The
boss said. With the order placed a few men drew their swords
and attack. By the time the few men were down, part of the
old Dojo looked like someone had hit it with a wrecking
So then that's mainly how the dojo got destroyed, not
by the drunken ex-swordsmen who were mentioned prior to the
flashback. Maybe the author forgot he wrote that...
"Head out! What's left of you!" The
boss said and with that they retreated. Kenshin sheathed his
sword and looked at the damage. They began picking up most
of the debris. After an hour of cleaning they took a break.
So... What the hell? They didn't even noticed that Kaoru got
captured? Some friends they are.
" So Yahiko, tried to take those
men on alone?" Sanosuke asked the young boy. " No!" He
answered smugly. "Then where was Kaoru? " Sanosuke asked.
Yahiko hesitated for a moment. His heart was pounding as he
recalled the events.
Yahiko: Funny, it seemed like the bandits were beating...
someone.... Ah, whatever. Let's get back to cleaning up the
dojo and worry about it later.
" They beat her....." he said.
Kenshin and Sano snapped to attention and egged him on.
Yahiko took a deep breath " Not with swords but physically.
That boss guy smacked her so hard blood came from her face.
Then the slime ball had the nerve to kicked her across the
Yeah, and don't forget the part where you stood there and
did nothing while all this was happening you spineless
Yahiko said and lowered his head
shielding his eyes. Kenshin stood instantly. " Where is Miss
Kaoru?" He said looking around the damaged place.
" I think they took her."
Not only is Yahiko a fierce warrior, he's also a master
Yahiko said simply, tears threatening
to fall but he sucked it up. Kenshin almost dropped to his knees
and cried but he had to be strong.
Kenshin: Alright... I suppose... I'LL just have to cook dinner
" Why didn't you tell us sooner?"
Sanosuke yelled. He was seeing red in his eyes. Kaoru had been
sweet, kind, She always took care of them when they got hurt.
Not to mention she actually noticed when one of them got
"We have to save her!" Kenshin said
trying to keep his cool. He knew she would be in serious danger
if they waited until the next morning but they had to wait as it
would be easier to see. No one slept that night...
Oh my God. That's why they're going to let her get raped
and possibly murdered!? Because they're afraid of the dark!?!
Now this story is just punishing me for thinking.
While the men retreated she felt herself being dragged on the
ground. She looked behind her as her body leaked a small trail
of blood. She moaned in pain.
For a martial arts instructor, she went down damn easy. Perhaps
her inability to put up a decent fight is because of the
author's apparent contempt for women. "Stupid Mom, grounding me
for trying to push Sally in front of that car... Take that
Kaoru, and that! Buy ME clothes for my birthday, will ya!
I'll show you!"
She was being dragged by her ankle, her
newest blue kimono covered in blood and mud. Tears began to
escape her eyes. She had lost her voice no words came out when
she tried to scream for Kenshin and Sanosuke. Neither of them
had noticed her.
Thanks to a very convenient plot hole.
After about an hour of traveling and
being dragged in Kaoru's place them men stopped on the outskirts
of the next town.
"Them men"? The narrator spontaneously became a hillbilly.
" Let's camp out in the woods men!" The
boss guy yelled as the men turned to the woods and found a
fairly nice clearing. The man holding her ankle let go but then
grabbed her wrists and bound them together. Then he slung her
into a tree and tied her to it tightly.
He threw her up INTO a tree!? You'd think it would have been
easier to just tie her to the trunk...
The rope was squeezing the air from her
but it was better than what was happening next. ' Please Kenshin'
She prayed as the men began to form a circle around her licking
their drunken lips.
"Oh mahhn, my lipsh are SHO waishted righ' now..."
%*%*%*%*%*%End of chapter!!!
So what ya think? Good or Bad? Please review! I need to know!
Thank you now please review!
How about I review your ass with my foot! Four
Okay I have NO reviews! Do you peeps
want me to continue!!!
Well I will quit this story right here
and now! So you'd better REVIEW!
WARNING: This chapter contains rape..........U Know the rules!
Yo. ...Those are the letters missing from that sentence.
" Let's have some fun men!" The boss yelled and with that Kaoru
was in trouble, her worst fears coming and appearing before her.
I really hope her worst fears are watching a bunch of bandits
She felt the various hands of the men
touching her all over groping her chest. The boss stepped up
directly in front of her and ripped the bottom of her kimono off
feeling her roughly. She gasped and wriggled trying to get free,
but the man grunted and slapped her face. " Damn wench! Stop
Good to see this chapter wasted no time in offending pretty much
He yelled and jabbed a finger inside
her maiden hood. She screamed as the intense pain didn't stop
there. Another bandit pulled her top off and attacked her
BANDIT hits enemy BREAST for 31 damage. Enemy BREAST has been
defeated. You find 20 GOLD.
He sucked and bit her hard nipples.
I wonder if Demonicslayer even understands the implications of
her nipples being hard. Probably not.
" Please stop!" She sobbed as the man
on her breast bit until he drew blood. " Shut it bitch!" One man
said from behind. He swallowed her lips in his forcing his
tongue in her mouth. Kaoru gagged a little as he bruised her
I'll admit this fic does do a very good job of helping the
reader identify with the protagonist... I too feel like I'm
being violated to the point where I want to throw up.
The boss had pulled his two fingers out
of her and smeared her juices over her flat stomach. He then
took his length and wrapped her legs around him. Two men stood
behind the boss holding her legs, while they were at it they
bruised her legs up biting at them.
Why are they biting her legs? That isn't kinky, it's just
He forced himself into her tight space
breaking her innocence. She screamed in a mans mouth and bucked
her hips. She silently begged Kenshin to show up and save her
from this hell, but he was nowhere to be seen.
Meanwhile, back at the dojo:
Sanosuke: My battleship! Damn it, Kenshin won again!
The leader hadn't even waited for her
to adjust, he began pumping hard into her tiny fragile frame. He
came letting a howl if relief out as she came into her orgasm.
Her orgasm had forced some of her virgin blood to trickle down
He came into her orgasm!? I think Demonicslayer is getting some
of the terminology mixed up here...
The man let go of her lips and began
untying her. The boss redressed himself and pulled her face in
to his large hands. " By the way the name is Senginti..." He
You know, a true gentleman would have properly introduce himself
before the rape.
" Alright men I am done do what you
want with her now but no killing. That's my job." He smirked and
left her sight heading inside a tent. Kaoru began to shake as
some man untied her but bounded her wrist and laid her on the
I was really, REALLY hoping this scene would be over by now...
She was whimpering in fear. ' Gods
Kenshin, Where are you? Do you even care about me!?' she
wondered as men fought to go first.
Meanwhile, back at the dojo:
Kenshin: Alright guys, next up we got 'Ice Castles'. If you're
like me, I seriously suggest you get your box of tissues out for
They finally agreed and the dark
skinned man straddled her hips putting his erection at her
entrance. She was covered and sweat and blood and not to mention
various fluids. She opened her mouth to scream as he pushed his
VERY large penis into her small hole.
It's going to take SO many hours of huffing varnish remover to
make me forget I read this...
He scream became muffled as a man
pushed his cock in her mouth grabbing her hair. " Bite and you
die, no regrets..." He whispered and pumped his dick in her
mouth moaning in pleasure, She almost threw up because of how
far he pushed into her mouth.
They're painting the walls of your private suite in hell this
very minute, Demonicslayer.
The man at her pussy dug his finger
nails in to her thighs as he threw his head back in sheer bliss
and came in to her forcing her to swallow.
Man, I'm losing track of which bandits are coming in which
The night went on like that over and
over. Kaoru thought she would die just from the amount of pain
her body was in. She was covered in blood, semen, sweat, and
This whole fanfic just oozes bodily fluids... AND EVIL!
A short and rather stubby man leaned
over her and chuckled at her fear. He pulled his hand into a
fist and punched her hard in the stomach a few times with great
I think anyone who finds this arousing should have his dick
chopped off, have it bronzed, and then be skull-fucked to death
She arched her back gasping for air. "
So you don't have any souvenirs" He laughed and began to walk
Bandit: Ha ha, just kidding! Here, have this t-shirt that says
"I was gang-raped by bandits and all I got was this lousy
She laid there with no life to move on
or continue...She breathed heavily and tears poured. Her mind
raced as the men retreated to their tents but decided to bound
and gag her to a tree. She gave up trying to escape and fell
asleep never wanting to wake up again....
Yeah, I REALLY think the readers feel sorry enough for her at
this point, man.
*%*%*%*%*%*%*% To the Dojo (the next
Leaving the Dojo gates walked three determined people. " Say
Kenshin, How will we find her?" Yahiko asked. Kenshin stood
silent as did Sano.
...Yes, three determined, albeit outstandingly moronic
Truth was they had no clue how they
would find her but they would try anyway. They began walking,
barely a foot away Yahiko tripped and hit the dirt. Sano began
laughing and torturing him.
The caption on the snapshot of this scene would read, "Sanosuke
and Yahiko lighten the mood with some playful razzing while
hunting for their friend's horrifically ravaged, possibly
Yahiko scrunched his face up and looked
down at the earth he had fallen on. Leading away from him was a
trail of blood. Not to far from the blood was Miss Kaoru's hair
ribbon. It was soaked in her blood.
Son of a bitch, how did she not bleed to death on her way to the
Kenshin clenched his fist in anger as
her tried to remain calm. The three fellows walked on for a good
hour and reached the outskirts of another village. The blood
veered off the dirt road leading into the woods.
Blood makes for a very macabre alternative to breadcrumbs.
Kaoru blinked her eyes open as the sun shined on her uncovered
body. Her body was bruised badly and had spots of dried blood.
She could barely stretch her legs. When she did a sharp pain
rushed from her stomach to her thighs. She winced as the pain
began to throb.
You think that hurts, try waking up the morning after you
tried rock-wall climbing at the gym for the first time. It's,
A few minutes later she heard the
sounds of the men waking inside their tents. Her bright blue
eyes widened and tears shed as she heard them talking about
having another round with her.
Oh man, if I wake up that early, I don't even have the energy to
brush my teeth until I've downed two or three cups of coffee,
much less participate in an orgy.
He swatted at the bushes with his sword as they walked through
reaching the campsite.
You picked the wrong day to mess with Kenshin, all you walking
His eyes scanned the area for any signs
of the teacher. Sano spotted her and turned Yahiko around. "
This isn't a sight for you to see." He stated simply. " Wait in
the bushes." Kenshin asked as him and Sano walked into the
Yahiko: The evil walking bushes!? Hell no!
Kaoru's tears stopped as she saw her
two rescuers. Of course color instantly rushed to her face being
almost fully naked. Sanosuke bent down next to her trying not to
look at her as he cut the bounds with a small dagger. He also
stripped himself of the white kimono top.
Sanosuke: If it makes you feel any better, I'll get naked too.
The least he could do was wrap her in
it to cover her. Kenshin pulled the gag from her mouth and
hugged her to his chest.
Now I wanna see them try to offer a decent excuse as to why they
didn't show up last night. That should be good for a laugh.
Sanosuke ushered them up to leave.
Kenshin stood and put a hand down to her. She pulled her self up
attempting to stand. She fell and screamed in pain. At that
moment men from the tents poured out drawing their weapons,
concerned at her screams.
Goddamn, even the bandits care more about her wellbeing!
Yahiko ran from the bushes to Kenshin's
side and steadied himself. " Leave her and we MAY spare your
lives..." Senginti yelled. Kenshin scooped the hurt Kaoru in his
arms and ran out of the clearing placing her down behind a tree
Yeah, because I'm sure that even thought the bandits saw
Kenshin take her over there, the fact that she's behind a
tree will confuse them and make them forget where she is, thus
ensuring her safety during the battle.
" Thank you....For saving me...but your
late I don't feel like living any more..." She said looking away
from his hurt face. He understood completely but wouldn't allow
her to talk like that.
...So he bashed her face in with the hilt of his sword. After
all, women are objects and shouldn't backtalk men lest they be
reminded of their place, right Demonicslayer?
He bent down and place a kiss on her
forehead before her ran back to help the others...
End of chapter...Next chapter lots of blood, Batosai takes
Kenshin's body over. Big conflict and Kaoru's broken spirit...
PLEASE REVIEW! I haven't got one YET! WAHHHHHHHH! You mean
readers! I review to everyone's story I read! ~_~ Very pissed
Oh shut the hell up. Just be thankful people aren't sending you
profanity-ridden hatemail by the hundreds like they probably
I MAY STOP THE STORY! Do you want
that??? Grrrrrrrr! This chapter was a little sad but still be
NICE if you review!
Actually, I'd be fine with it if you just stopped the story...
Also, it should be noted that Demonicslayer pulls this
demanding, whiney-ass emo shit before and after every single
chapter. However, I'm going to leave out his mini-rants for
the rest of this episode because they're not pertinent to the
story, and also because reading them hurts your eyes worse than
if you filled a pair of goggles with undiluted citric acid and
then wore them for a month without blinking.
Shattered. That was the best word for Kaoru at this point.
It also does a damn fine job of describing the readers' hope for
humanity at this point.
She had been violated and humiliated.
Life was killing her slowly.
The ultimate oxymoron.
Her body ached and now her belly stung
with pain. Sure she was happy to be out of there, but things
would never be the same as they were. Would she even continue to
live life? Would she want to? Why continue life knowing that you
were violated and forced into the unthinkable?
Now we get to enter the depressing Lifetime Original Movie-esque
post-rape stage of the fic. Goody shit.
She groaned in pain and kept running
possibilities through her mind.
Uh, Kenshin's standing, like, two yards away from her. Dude,
don't show us your bizarre scene-change lines unless they're
absolutely necessary! I mean, "%*%*%*%"!? What the hell is
Kenshin's blood was boiling. When he first came into that
clearing and looked in to her ghostly eyes he found her spirit
was broken along with her battered body. His vision became
blurry as his anger grew so much the Batosai began to take over
his body. They would pay for doing this to Miss Kaoru.
I like how Kenshin makes rage-fueled bloodshed a priority over
getting Kaoru to a doctor or offering her comfort after her
He ran to the clearing seeing Sanosuke and Yahiko already
engaged in fighting. He pulled the reverse blade from it's
sheath. He couldn't control himself. He attacked every man in
sight, killing them brutally.
I hope Yahiko and Sanosuke got out of the way...
He felt his normal side take over again after all the men were
dead. Yahiko and Sanosuke stared in shock. Had the sweet Kenshin
just brutally kill about 37 men in a few strokes of his sword.
I should just follow the question marks' example and leave this
story without ever looking back.
Kenshin panted and sheathed the reverse blade again. He looked
at the two others and continued on in to the forest to retrieve
the wounded Kaoru. The three guys were coated in everyone else's
blood. They went to retrieve the battered Kaoru and headed for
home with her in tow.
...Dragging her by her ankle, leaving a small trail of blood in
case they ever needed to find their way back to the campsite for
After about two hours of walking they reached the broken gates
of the Dojo. Kaoru now slept in Kenshin's arms, addicted to his
That's how it starts. Years from now she's gonna be a heat
junkie, selling herself for money to buy firewood and candles,
getting high in the hot springs every night... It's sad, really.
They pushed their way through the rubble making it down the
partly caved in hall way. Yahiko pushed open her bedroom door
and pulled some bedding out for her. They laid out a futon in
her room and very carefully put her on it gently as possible.
Well, unless they threw her on it from across the room, I doubt
she's really going to care how softly they put her on a futon
after what she's been through.
Kenshin couldn't even imagine her pain, it was worse than any
battle wound he had ever received. She had lost all of her
dignity and pride. What else was there to live for?
That Kenshin sure is one supportive, reassuring son of a bitch
Almost immediately they began to bandage her miner wounds first.
They would leave the more personal wounds for Magumi........
Magumi knocked on the broken Dojo doors and Sano opened the door
and showed her to Kaoru's room. The previous night they had all
stayed in her room never taking their eyes off the teacher.
Magumi: I would have been here last night, but, you know, it was
Sanosuke: I totally understand.
The sliding door opened to reveal Sano standing with Magumi.
Yahiko nodded and left the room knowing that Kaoru had
'personal' injuries. However Kenshin and Sano did NOT leave the
This is VERY important folks. Kenshin and Sano are STILL in the
ROOM. REMEMBER that.
Magumi had asked them for help of course not to look at Kaoru's
abused body. " Please turn so I can check for any other wounds."
"Oh sure, you can help me treat and bandage Kaoru, but for
Christ's sake DON'T LOOK AT HER."
Her voice was firm but sweet. Kenshin nodded and Sano just
Sano, like the readers, just doesn't give a shit anymore.
Magumi removed a bit of the shredded blue kimono. She gasped and
shuddered. There were bruises bigger than ever on the insides of
her thighs. Kenshin snapped his head around hearing her gasp
only to see a sickening sight. Kaoru's inner thighs were blood
slickened and black and blue. He shivered not in a good way.
...Is there a "good" way to shiver?
He felt his stomach lurch and he turned his head away.
So he'll brutally slaughter 37 men without hesitation, but the
sight of a few bruises makes him want to puke.
Magumi shook her head. How was Kaoru going to handle this? She
shook the thoughts away. A few hours later Kaoru began to
awaken. Pain hit her in waves but not as much as before. She
remembered passing out on the trip home.
No Kaoru, you're thinking of that time you went to South Beach
during spring break.
She blinked her eyes slowly open revealing four pairs of eyes
staring at her. " M...Magumi?" She managed to say. Kaoru
attempted to sit up only to have an arm push her down.
"Stay on your back and look hurt so the readers will have more
pity for you."
She craned her neck to right to see who held her down. Kaoru met
the deep blue eyes of Kenshin. He looked so sad.
Aww. No more easily-seduced virgin booty waiting for Kenshin. :(
' Why does he look so sad? Is he that way for me? Why do I feel
this much pain? My stomach.'
I see, so the rape gave her amnesia. Of course.
She thought as Kenshin gently pushed her back to lay down. " Lay
down Miss Kaoru, everything has been taken care of." He said
trying to soothe her.
He liked being useful to her.
You know what else would have been useful to her? Saving her ass
from the gang of violent, horny bandits!
At least she didn't reject him for what had happened. He began
to stroke her hair again liking the soft silky texture to it.
She began to fall asleep, Her eyelids grew heavy and she closed
them. Her mind replayed the events in her nightmares....
I know that pain all too well. I dreamt about this horrible
story over and over again for a week after the first time I read
Kaoru began to moan and thrash a little. Kenshin put his hands
gently on each shoulder and gave her a small shake. Her eyes
snapped open and she shot up bumping heads with Kenshin. She
fell back after hitting him.
Shouldn't this be on the blooper reel at the end?
The dream had been so real. She looked up at Kenshin who was
rubbing a red spot on his forehead. "Umm, Sorry" She said. He
took her left hand in his a gave it a slight squeeze for
reassurance. She sat there and kept her eyes from his ocean ones
not wanting to talk about her experience.
Kenshin: Heheh, hey, you remember that time when you were
dragged off into the woods and repeatedly raped like a filthy
piece of meat? That sure was a wild night! ....What? Too soon?
Kenshin dropped his shoulders and gave a silent sigh. He was
trying to make her feel better. It wasn't working, she was
pushing him away from her.
Damn Kenshin you should just tell her you love her and leave.
Huh!? The narrator is giving one of the characters advice?
Are... Are you allowed to do that?
She doesn't want a man now that she has had this done to her.
But this is Kaoru, Sweet and innocent, Beautiful and smart. His
Kamiya Kaoru, forever. His inner selves fought, but No agreement
over her came.
Although they did agree that a nice, cold can of Fanta sounded
damn good at the moment.
Instead of letting her lay on him he scooped her up in his arms
and held her to his chest as if she would break if he let go. He
wasn't letting go any time soon. He would let his emotions run
to her even if she didn't feel the same.
Now she can be emotionally raped as well.
AUGH! Be OVER, damn you!
Kaoru could feel Kenshin's ocean eyes baring down on her as if
asking to tell him what actually happened. She didn't want to
tell him. One because he would blame himself for not being
Good! He should blame himself. The whole ordeal was largely his
and two for feeling pity for her. She hated people's pity.
Kenshin just wanted to be helpful though. She
looked up and sure enough he was staring her dead in the eye
demanding an answer but in a gentle way.
Kenshin: Speak to me or I'll smack you! ...But not too hard or
She opened her mouth to speak only to have silence ring through
the room. Kenshin was silently egging her on. Trying to be
helpful in any way.
Yes, please keep establishing that fact.
Tears threatened to fall. Kaoru buried her head in Kenshin's
kimono and let loose the tears. " You weren't there to save
me.... They abused me...my body.*sob*... I feel so dirty.
*sob* *gasp* *burp* *sob* *cough* *fart* *groan* *sob*
...They all used me for their own sick and twisted
pleasure....*sob*...I wanted to die, I still want to." She
cried. Kenshin's heart sunk deep to the pit of his stomach. He
felt a wave of guilt suppress his body.
Little late in the story to suddenly be acting all unselfish for once,
don't ya think?
He handled the crying woman ever so gently and tried to soothe
her only to be pushed away from her raging emotions.
Heh, that's a woman for ya! Those crazy broads and their RAGING
emotions! If only they used logic like men...
Kenshin pulled Kaoru's body closer to his neck and began to cry
on her hair. " This is all my fault. I wasn't there to protect
you, I should have been there. I SHOULD HAVE BEEN THERE FOR
YOU!!!" he shouted half in anger and half in pity.
Demonicslayer promises TWO scoops of melodrama in every fic!
" I don't want your pity!" Kaoru shouted at him and pushed
herself away from him rolling on to her futon. She rolled to
face away from him. She didn't want his pity, All she wanted was
for him to hold her and be there for her.
Oh come on, Kaoru! Play the guilt card right and you can get a
more out of him than that.
She closed her eyes and sleep consumed her.
Kenshin left the room after Kaoru fell into sleep. He retreated
into his room across the hall. He slammed the sliding door shut
and plopped himself down on his own futon.
Well I think it should be obvious to everyone by now that
Kenshin was the real victim in this story.
----------------------Six Months later---------------
" I now pronounce you husband and wife, you may kiss the bride."
What the... WHAT THE HELL!?! This story is skipping around like
friggin' Red Riding Hood on her way to Grandma's house! Well
shit, I guess I can't complain about anything that gets us
closer to the end...
Kenshin leaned down and kissed Kaoru passionately on the lips.
Yahiko and Sanosuke smiled at each other.
Yahiko & Sanosuke: *giggle* Our wedding is next!
The kiss broke and Kenshin picked Kaoru up bridal style. " I
love you..." He whispered. She nodded and kissed his scar on his
cheek. " I love too." She said. The wedding was held at the
Dojo. Only Kaoru, Kenshin, Sano, Yahiko, and the village head
Six months of planning and this was the most extravagant wedding
they could come up with.
The head man left leaving the new 'Family' to themselves. " Now
we are all family, Sanosuke and Yahiko are here to stay!" Kaoru
said. Yahiko and Sano brightened up. They had a REAL place to
call home. Even if they were a strange looking family.
So this is all just a prequel to the sitcom...
"On with the honeymoon you two, me and the midget are going in
to town for a while." Sano said and grabbed the back of Yahiko's
Kimono dragging him out. ((((A/N: I DECIDED NOT TO ADD THE NEW
No shit? And here I was sure you were going to work them into
the last four paragraphs somehow. And why the hell bring that up
now, anyway? You could have just waited until the end... But I
guess that would have made too much sense.
Kenshin smiled at the two leaving and carried Kaoru into his
room where he laid her gently on his futon. He positioned him
self above her and kissed her passionately as he played with her
A lesser man would make an Obi-Wan Kenobi joke here. Not me,
She wrapped her long and slender arms around his neck, loving
the friction between their bodies. She could feel his arousal
poking her lower stomach.
And thus was born Kenshin's peculiar nickname, "Pokey".
He slowly untied her robe and let it fall open. He could see the
fear creeping up in her eyes as she moved her arms to cover her
body. He stopped her and leaned into her ear.
"Your sweet ass is MINE now, trick!"
" You look gorgeous..." He said and kissed her. He rained kisses
all over her exposed skin. He played with her breast, making her
moan and or press his head closer.
...Well, which was it?
It felt right doing this with Kenshin, He was her true love.
Kaoru spread her legs as he positioned him self at her entrance.
" Do you want me to?" Kenshin asked.
Dude, she just stripped naked in front of you and spread her
legs open. What other signals could you possibly be reading from
She nodded. " I can't be scared all my life." She said and
kissed him as he thrusted into her. They both moaned in each
others mouth. Sweat dripped from the bodies as Kaoru met
Kenshin's hard thrusts.
While the first sex scene was repulsive and sickeningly violent,
this one is simply vague and mechanical. My advice to the author
is to stick to stories where people keep their clothes on from
here on out. Also, I strongly recommend that he hang himself.
Both holding on to their climaxes. Kaoru was first to let go of
her orgasm and Kenshin followed. He collapsed on top of her then
rolled off pulling her into his embrace.
Kaoru: So that was it, huh? Hmm. No, no, it was... nice. It was
nice. You, uh, said you killed all the bandits, right?
Ah. Oh, just wondering.
She snuggled into him....Sleep consumed
______----A Few Weeks Later----_______
" KENSHIN!" Kaoru screamed. Kenshin came rushing around the
corner and into their bedroom. " What is it?" He asked urgently.
" I'm.....I'm.... I'm pregnant!" She shouted...
Hey, and even after that bandit punched your uterus into pulp.
Good for you.
%%%%***%*%%*%*%*End of Story!
And not a moment too soon. On a final note, I'd like to point
out that this story didn't have shit to do with fixing
I plan on making this a SERIES! Haha!
The Sequel will be: Saving Life
GAAAHH!!! Oh no you don't! I suffered through one of your
horrendous stories, and that's already one too many! You can
take your crappy sequel and shove it up your ass right next to
your head for all I care! I am DONE with you.
Man, what an ending. I really could have gone without the
notification of an impending sequel... It was like one of those
horror movies where the surviving teenagers think the killer is
finally dead and everything is going to go back to normal, and
then in the very last scene the camera pans down to the pile of
rubble the guy was buried under, and this bloody hand clutching
a huge knife bursts out from under the debris. Instead of
closure and a feeing of satisfaction that the terror has ended,
the audience just gets "The End" followed by "Dot, dot, dot,
Don't lose too much sleep over that frightening revelation,
though. If more of this shit ever does appear on the internet,
chances are it will be on some obscure, ad-ridden freebie page
where no one will ever find it. That's right folks... If you can
believe it, somehow animegurl123's attempt at foiling the
security over at FanFiction.net ultimately ended in failure. The
day after I nabbed this story off of the site, it was gone
without a trace. It looks as though even the mastermind duo of
Demoicslayer and animegurl123 was unable to come up with an
elaborate enough scheme to sneak an adult-rated fic back onto
the site for any substantial amount of time. Many have tried,
and many have failed, but I'm sad to say that if those two
criminal geniuses couldn't pull it off, then I doubt anyone can.
And even though Domicslayer wins the prize for dumbassery with
his brainless strategy of getting one of his
single-digit-IQ-sporting internet friends to repost his story on
the same site that deleted it only hours beforehand, I have to
say that the man is even less adapt at writing erotic stories
than he is at choosing where to upload them. Overlooking the
fact that it was drawn-out and boring as hell, there was nothing
exceptionally awful about this story except the part that
was obviously meant to be its main publicity draw. I'm talking,
of course, about the rape scene. And when you get right down to
it, even if the rest of the story was magnificently written
enough to put the complete works of Charles Dickens to shame,
that scene alone would have been more than enough to drag the
entire fanfic straight to Shit Town.
Thanks to the internet, I've become pretty numb to --and even
more or less accepting of-- more horrid sexual fetishes than I
care to admit, but rape is a whole 'nother ballgame... A
ballgame in which, when those fifth inning munchies set in, you
politely ask the guy selling snacks for a hotdog, but instead of
just handing it to you he also pulls out a taco from his bag and
then violently jams the hotdog into the taco, then retracts it
and shoves it in again even harder than the first time. Then you
start screaming at him to stop because you don't want the hotdog
to go into the taco, but he totally ignores your pleas for mercy
and just keeps ramming the hotdog into the taco over and over
again, ketchup and salsa flying everywhere, his twisted,
maniacal laughter drowned out only by your own uncontrollable
sobbing and the cheers of the crowd who seem to find the whole
situation darkly amusing for some reason you will never
understand. While there may be some people out there who would
enjoy eating a hotdog and a taco after they've been manhandled
and squished together, I'm not one of them, and I no more
understand how such a meal could look appetizing than I
understand how anyone could find descriptions of a brutal rape
erotic or exciting.
So congratulations for majorly fucking up twice on one
assignment, Demonicslayer. I have a newfound inkling of respect
for FanFiction.net knowing that your story will never exist
within its database, and that their readers will never lay eyes
upon the abominations you've written of. And if anyone does
ever read your story somewhere and manages to get turned on by
it enough to try
the whole "kidnap-n'-rape" thing in real life, then I sincerely
hope they have a preference for man-ass and make you
their first and only victim.